TheDyingSun's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Henry E. Yes (We miss you)]

"Henry?"
"Yes-ry?"

[Kawai Bounce]

BIused

[One Pixel Artwork]

THIS IS THE BEST ART I'VE SEEN IN MY LIFE. YOU ARE LEGENDARY!!!

Cyberdevil responds:

IT MAY BE JUST ONE PIXEL BUT IT'S... THE WON PIXEL? THANK YOU SUN!!!

[Long OC]

Really pushing that file size limit aren't ya?

[Christmas Advent 2019]

Looks like you're gonna have a hostage situation on your hands with the hawk.

Oddlem responds:

LOL hell yeah

[Plague]

Nice job on the piece! The line work is dynamic and provides an interesting piece to look at! I think you need more consistency with form on the skulls on the bottom as some of them look beyond cartoonish human. I believe part of your intent was to give the skulls expressions as a reaction to the plague doctor sitting on them, and I think you should exaggerate that with line work reflecting expressions on each and every skull or possibly giving them some sort of eyes (which I think the eye idea detracts from the main focus, but it's something to play with). The colors are well chosen and executed, however there is some lighting that is either missing or done incorrectly. For example, the potions bottle is glowing from the inside so there should be little to none black shadow on the bottle and a more intense glow coming from the inside of it (I hope that made sense). The last thing is the background. Fantastic job on making the background and foreground go together decently, however, I think making the forms sharper closer to the viewer and adding more lines to define the environment closer to the plague doctor helps create a smoother transition.
Overall an enjoyable and fun piece! I'm not complaining.
You have some good work otherwise as well and I hope to see you to continually get better!
I know this was a lot, so if you have any questions or want me to go over more things, I can help you out with that! Keep drawing! You have good tone in your drawings!

I am I biased since it's a plague doctor? - Yes
Edit: Btw, Welcome to Newgrounds!

DynamicAfro responds:

The image have a couple of years already, i just wanted to share it here, but thank you so much for the feedback is always nice read constructive opinions. :D!

[Shock-Tartz]

But how did you know?!?!?

[In The Flowers]

Your color choice is good, but what you're mainly missing is contrast between light and shadow. Don't be afraid to use darker tones

GoodL responds:

I'll keep that in mind, thanks a ton!

[Gamerjuice0 album art]

Blender and Krita Gang
Looks like those plastic dinner cups they have at summer camp

[Witches & Boxer]

Dang it cam.

LoganPhresh responds:

Some people like cupcakes exclusively, while myself, I say
There is naught nor ought there be nothing so exalted on the face of god's grey
Earth as that prince himself... the ninjamuffin!