TheDyingSun's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wander's mask]

I love the concept of the mask itself, however, the mask needs more rendering and this piece overall needs more "meat" to it. Pieces like this can stand alone, but they do need a little extra to do so.

[Hungry Demon]

Overall ok, but the shading is kind of uncanny and the slime feels more like the skin than slime. For the skin I might suggest lightening up the shadows. You will of course have a really dark shadow, but skin is transparent and you have to keep in mind of that. You tend to have to use more hue shading for skin along with making it darker. For the slime I might add some transparency and reflections from the rest of the body to give it more of a slime feel. However, if you want to keep it opaque just add more reflections of the surfaces around it. I would also suggest taking a look at how liquids flow as well, as perfect streams don't usually come out of an area filled with water. I might also suggest working of the anatomy of the fat on your creature. It looks kind of bloated to an uncomfortable point. Keep an eye on shading, and that's it! Sorry for going all in there mate but I do see a lot of potential in you for creating demons and other wacky creatures. Make you're nightmares real, and keep up the good work!

DaemmonArts responds:

Hey! Thank you so much for this. I really appreciated and I am going to think in all you said to me, to improve my art. I really like to receive critics so I can improve my work. Thank you so much!!

[Username]

Now that you mentioned it, I want to try it!
Otherwise, lovely humor as always sir. and the expressions are priceless.
Keep up the great work!

ChazDude responds:

thx! :>

[Tiger L]

She looks a little off balance at the top. Moving the head and shoulders forward should do the trick! Adding a little expression to the character would also add some personality. Overall, the colors look amazing! The transitions are very pleasing to look at as well! Keep it up!

[Before The Incident..]

I just love the father and son relationship between Horatio and Hansel. It's so adorable! You captured the bond amazingly!

[Pico Day Reanimated - Commemorative Painting]

That night will live forever, it was awesome being there and meeting a lot of the Newgrounds community, and the painting brings back the wonderful memory!

[cat womman]

Nice application of the cat legs. The drawing really does a good job of combining a cat and a woman. Lovely technique and color. Focusing on the piece overall, I cannot say this is more creatively awesome than Arousing
-TheDyingSun 2017

[Horatio]

I like them Hansels.

[Elena]

Really love it! And you remembered to do the square pupil like a goat! Love the colors and style. Keep it up!

[HAPPY NEW YEAR 2016! :D]

Awesome! :3 it's so adorable, awesome, just cool! Great job tails! Winter is just awesome, and ice just shows it off in a lovely way! Happy (yeah late) New Year! Keep it up!

tailsbuddy responds:

Thanks dude!I will! :D