TheDyingSun's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hungry Demon]

Overall ok, but the shading is kind of uncanny and the slime feels more like the skin than slime. For the skin I might suggest lightening up the shadows. You will of course have a really dark shadow, but skin is transparent and you have to keep in mind of that. You tend to have to use more hue shading for skin along with making it darker. For the slime I might add some transparency and reflections from the rest of the body to give it more of a slime feel. However, if you want to keep it opaque just add more reflections of the surfaces around it. I would also suggest taking a look at how liquids flow as well, as perfect streams don't usually come out of an area filled with water. I might also suggest working of the anatomy of the fat on your creature. It looks kind of bloated to an uncomfortable point. Keep an eye on shading, and that's it! Sorry for going all in there mate but I do see a lot of potential in you for creating demons and other wacky creatures. Make you're nightmares real, and keep up the good work!

DaemmonArts responds:

Hey! Thank you so much for this. I really appreciated and I am going to think in all you said to me, to improve my art. I really like to receive critics so I can improve my work. Thank you so much!!

[Username]

Now that you mentioned it, I want to try it!
Otherwise, lovely humor as always sir. and the expressions are priceless.
Keep up the great work!

ChazDude responds:

thx! :>

[HAPPY NEW YEAR 2016! :D]

Awesome! :3 it's so adorable, awesome, just cool! Great job tails! Winter is just awesome, and ice just shows it off in a lovely way! Happy (yeah late) New Year! Keep it up!

tailsbuddy responds:

Thanks dude!I will! :D

[Daily Imagination #100 - Light Strangler]

Woo! #100!
And with that, it still looks awesome with lighting and colors! As always great job and keep up the awesome work!

Xephio responds:

Thanks mate. Will definitely try to keep posting frequently even after these dailies

[Animated Movies]

Nice job!
This is about exactly what happens. I like the style and the way you presented the topic. The feeling grows bigger and bigger as you realize how many younger kids are watching the movie with you.
Keep up the good work! ^^

BrandonPewPew responds:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :D

[SumoRoll #1]

Nice job!
The art style and concept is intriguing. Even though the style uses a semi cartoon like but shaded look that I love! Great job an keep up the good work!

UltimoGames responds:

thanks! I will try and keep it up if the Lord let me do the things I like to do.

[Drax The Destroyer]

Great job!
I got to see the movie, it was awesome.
If you saw it,
Remember Peter when they were being analysed?
(Jack in the box music) Oh, that how this machine works
Great shading, and also you were able to keep the original red lines he had.
Great job ^^

PaintBoxHero responds:

Yes I did see the movie and I really enjoyed it! The part with Peter was pretty funny. Glad you liked the painting!